Friday, December 14, 2012

Once again. . .

. . . I am writing a travel-based essay. I call it Mountains, but you may call it what you wish. So without further adieu,


Mountains

     “Fat bulges of mountains,
     barely visible whales in the fog
     of smoke-- the burning
     of their cousins'
     barnacles.”
    
     Last summer, fire swept through the open spaces of Montana. The smoke blew clear down to Utah, and probably beyond. It’s makes for a lousy summer day, when you can’t see your own mountains, even when you live in a small valley. It does make for unearthly sunrises though. The haze takes away the familiarity of the landscape, hiding mountains, trees, and buildings. And it glows golden, shimmering as the dawn crescendos into normal, bright day.
     I drove through Montana with my parents that summer, clunking along in our massive brown Dodge Ram van that’s about thirty years old. The fire was somewhere close, if the smoke was any indication. The setting sun shattered its rays through the smoke, and everything outside glowed red. We could even look at the sun, it was so dimmed by the smoke. But the strangest things were the mountains. Black in the fading light, they seemed to swim through the shrouds of smog like whales through water. They seemed majestic, immovable creatures, covered with barnacles of trees and rocks. Their cousins, where the fire was, probably had all those barnacles burned off. Kind of like cosmetic surgery, only for fat bulges of land smashed upward out of the ground.
     I wondered how the sun rose on the destruction of whales, and set on the small towns in the valleys, so absolutely neutral above the clouds of smoke that keeps us invisible to it. But seeing as the answer was confusing, all I did was write about it. There is nothing new under the sun, and where there’s smoke, there’s fire, just like there’s always been.

1 comment:

  1. I enjoyed your descriptions, Elliot (also reminded me of driving through the burned forests of Yellowstone last summer!).

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